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Issue #260
November 2024

Suspense (A state or condition of mental uncertainty or excitement…)

Suspense (A state or condition of mental uncertainty or excitement…)

By G. Miki Hayden
Instructor at Writer's Digest University online and private writing coach

firstwriter.com – Thursday October 31, 2024

Suspense, as a noun, may sound vague, but as an artful expression in film, on stage, or in novels, suspense is a fairly specific ingredient. Suspense can dominate the genre being presented throughout, or suspense can come to the fore for a scene or a moment at the height of the story, and then resolve. Suspense can be sprinkled in like a condiment, or it can relentlessly keep an audience on the edge of their seats for the entire piece.

No matter how suspense is used, in a mystery, ghost or horror story, in an adventure, or as part of a futuristic end-of-the-world drama, this chilling emotion will pay off its creator well, in dollars and in fame. However, real suspense can be hard to produce.

On stage or in film, suspense can be urged along by music, spooky shadows on the set, or an actor’s makeup; yet on the page, suspense can only be produced by… words. But ,as we writers all must know, the word is mightier than any other means of affecting human emotion. And thus words will certainly do.

So, how do we keep the reader in a state of mental uncertainty or excitement? By sleight of hand, of course, by suggestion, by both the usual means and the unusual.

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Respiration by G. Miki Hayden In Book 3 of the Rebirth series, martial arts grandmaster Jay Gardner faces down a Yakuza gangster and comes into his own as a spiritual leader.

(Book 1, Rescued, is free for download.)

News

Some of this month's news for writers from around the web.

Artificial intelligence is better at writing poems than William Shakespeare, a bizarre new study has found

Artificial intelligence is better at writing poems than William Shakespeare, a bizarre new study has found

thesun.co.uk – Friday November 15, 2024

PEOPLE prefer poems written by artificial intelligence to works by famous writers like Shakespeare and Lord Byron, a study has found.

Readers rated virtual verse as more emotional, creative and beautiful — until they found it was churned out by a bot.

Scientists think rhymes written by algorithms use simpler language, so people enjoy them more than complicated old classics.

They tested the effects on 2,300 people who were not poetry experts — and found readers could not tell the difference.

Writing in the journal Scientific Reports, Pittsburgh University’s Brian Porter said: “Like AI-generated paintings and faces, AI poems are now ‘more human than human’.

“We find people rate AI-generated poems more highly. However, they evaluate them more negatively when told the poem is AI generated.”

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Dry Bones by G. Miki Hayden Senior officer Aaron Clement brings the worst of the worst to justice in Oklahoma.

Elements of Style: How You Write What You Write: Creative Writing Workshop with Jennifer Landretti

Elements of Style: How You Write What You Write: Creative Writing Workshop with Jennifer Landretti

orionmagazine.org – Thursday November 14, 2024

Style, one could say, is how you write what you write. It’s the discrete way that any sort of writing unites the most common elements of the craft: word choice, sentence structure, the organization and order of whatever the writer is expressing. While an evocative style tempts us to imitation, the results are rarely anything more than a self-conscious study on the path to developing our own authentic style. All accomplished styles seem to hide their gifts in the open. They are bewitchingly sly— “insincere” Oscar Wilde would say—often multivalent, always with an eye toward what they’ve left out. Skillful stylists such as Elizabeth Strout, Mary Oliver, or Wendell Berry seem to produce without effort the singular way that a story, poem, or essay should unfold, while the voices that grace their pages—that of a character or narrator—seem to materialize in our imaginations as a complete person with spiritual heft, a thriving sensibility, arrested there in art and shimmering for as long as the words exist. At its finest, style is a sort of gestalt of soul.

So, how do we understand and craft our own styles? We’ll explore that question. We’ll do so by working primarily with the personal essay while dipping periodically into poetry. We’ll examine the effects of word choice and sentence structure, as well as consider some of the organizational strategies that essayists use. Always, we’ll keep alive the question of style: What’s yours? How so? Why so? We’ll sample a range of writers, from Joan Didion and Elizabeth Bishop to Vladimir Nabokov, John Updike, and Patricia Hampl, distinguished stylists all. Rather than map out a set curriculum, I’ll use a more organic approach: beyond the first couple of classes, I’ll adapt the course to the direction that class members seem most interested in going. Whatever direction we do go, we’ll undertake a variety of eye-opening, generative exercises and, I hope, enjoy several lively discussions, each centered on a particular aspect of style. This course is open to writers of all skill levels.

Duration: This online course meets from January 12th – March 2nd over eight consecutive Sundays from 6-8 pm ET (5-7 CT, 4-6 MT, 3-5 PT).

Application window: November 1-15

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New Writing North announces winter programme

New Writing North announces winter programme

atvtoday.co.uk – Thursday November 14, 2024

New Writing North has announced its winter programme, featuring a range of opportunities for aspiring and emerging writers across the region…

The Newcastle-based charity supports the development of professional skills for writers in the north, as well as encouraging writing and reading for pleasure and wellbeing. This winter sees an array of career development opportunities for emerging creatives, including paid work placements in publishing and professional industry workshops.

Anna Disley, Executive Director of Programme and Impact at New Writing North:

“This winter, there’s a chance for emerging creatives to kick-start, explore or develop careers with our far-ranging programme of workshops, courses, awards, and work placements. Our mission is to practically support and nurture talent from across our communities, and remove barriers to transformative creative opportunities. Thanks to our partners and supporters, there are a number of bursaries for career-making prospects on offer too.”

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Listings

A selection of the new listings added to firstwriter.com this month.

New Publisher Listing: Oh MG Press

New Publisher Listing: Oh MG Press

firstwriter.com – Tuesday October 29, 2024

Traditional middle grade publisher. No advance. High royalties. Welcomes submissions from authors based in the United States and Canada exclusively. Accepts early middle grade fiction between 16,000 and 30,000 words, and middle grade fiction between 30,000 and 65,000 words. Offers manuscript editing services for a fee.

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New Literary Agent Listing: Abi Fellows

New Literary Agent Listing: Abi Fellows

firstwriter.com – Thursday November 14, 2024

For fiction, please send your cover letter, one-page synopsis and first three chapters. ​For non-fiction, please send a proposal (including overview of book's main idea, information about you the author / why you are the person to write the book, an outline of full book with chapter breakdowns / descriptions and sources, a sample chapter and, if these are available to you, media links, advance praise, comparable titles).

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New Literary Agent Listing: Kait Lee Feldmann

New Literary Agent Listing: Kait Lee Feldmann

firstwriter.com – Monday November 11, 2024

I represent illustrators and illustrator-authors who are primarily interested in working on picture books and graphic novels. We’d be a good match if you enjoy wholesome chaos. Let’s make books for the kids who get in trouble for their imagination, the next generation of mad scientists, supervillains, and witches at the end of the street.

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Articles

Some of this month's articles for writers from around the web.

Fun and useful Christmas gifts for writers

Fun and useful Christmas gifts for writers

scottishbooktrust.com – Friday November 15, 2024

A few fun ideas for treating the writer in your life this festive season

Picking out Christmas gifts for writers can be tricky. After all, it’s not possible to pop a literary agent or massive book deal under the tree. Luckily, there are lots of other brilliant ideas for making the writer in your life feel special over the holidays. Here are a few of our favourites.

Books about writing

Even the most experienced writers sometimes need a little boost and that’s when books about harnessing creativity or examining the writing process are perfect. We’ve gathered together a few great suggestions in our writing about writing book list. I can also guarantee that if you walk into your local bookshop and ask what the staff recommend, they’ll be able to pick out something inspiring for you.

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'Three Women' Writer Lisa Taddeo Offers 3 Writing Insights Every Aspiring TV Writer Should Know

'Three Women' Writer Lisa Taddeo Offers 3 Writing Insights Every Aspiring TV Writer Should Know

screencraft.org – Thursday November 14, 2024

In ScreenCraft’s new interview with author and showrunner Lisa Taddeo, we dive into the art of adaptation and screenwriting. The writer recently brought her acclaimed book Three Women to the screen, and she has quite a few things to teach us about her process.

The Starz series features Shailene Woodley, Betty Gilpin, DeWanda Wise, and Gabrielle Creevy, and it’s based on Taddeo's bestselling exploration of desire, intimacy, and vulnerability. In the show, an author (Woodley) tells the complex stories of three women as they navigate the highs and lows of love and life.

It’s nonfiction—a true depiction of these women’s relationships and (at times, shocking) sex lives.

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First Person: My journey to writing a children’s book

First Person: My journey to writing a children’s book

algonquintimes.com – Sunday November 10, 2024

Over seven days, I put my dream of writing a book for kids into motion. The adventure taught me I can do more than I ever thought I could

“No, Auntie! Don’t go!” Kavaiah’s sweet voice stops me just as I’m about to step out the door. She tugs at my hand, holding tight to a new book I bought her, I Am Born to Be Awesome by Mechal Renee Roe. “Just read the book one more time, Auntie, PLEASE!” she begs, her eyes wide. How can I not be compelled to stay?

I smile, settle back onto the couch, and she jumps into my lap, eagerly flipping the book open to the first page. Kavaiah is full of energy when we read. She acts out each line, her four-year-old voice rising and falling with each word, making faces and gestures, soaking in every picture and phrase like it’s her first time hearing them.

I start, “I love the stars,” and she shouts, “I love racing cars!” Then we both chime in, “I am born to be awesome!” She takes her time turning each page, determined to slow me down if I go too fast. With every line, she finds something that resonates, whether it’s her love for bath time or playing in the park. She’s not just listening; she’s living each rhyme, seeing herself in the words and pictures. Each time we reach “I am born to be awesome,” she beams, and I feel it too. Her high-pitched voice makes my heart melt.

I never imagined that enrolling in Algonquin College’s journalism program would lead me to begin to write a children’s book. When the opportunity to write a personal narrative arose, I thought, why not take it further? Why not challenge myself to write a children’s book in seven days? I naively thought it wouldn’t be too hard, after all, it’s a children’s book. How complicated could it be?

Well, as it turns out, it was more challenging than I anticipated.

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